TIMPLACABLE

• MLP: FiM
• Adventure
• Sci-Fi

A lone wanderer in the final days of Man. An impregnable fortress work-camp to stand against the total emigration of humanity to virtual Equestria. The artificial intelligence called 'Celestia'. Everything has been accounted for. Everything.

• Alt. Universe
• Human
• Pinkie
• Celestia
• Big Mac
• Lyra
• OC

Chatoyance · 17k words · 3.6k views

What I liked:
•Formatting. The title, the first word of the chapter, and the image breaks between scenes.
•Plot. From the first word, I was drawn in. The big question was asked: who exactly is Raymond, and why does he hate Celestia? And what's up with Ford Denver?
•Exposition. Understated, no info dumps, no maid and butler dialogue—everything progresses naturally.

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In my family, or sometimes when I'm out somewhere, like when I was in college, the one thing that people used to say to me was this -

''So, when are you going to get a hair cut?'' or ''Your hair needs cutting.''

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